Well, it appeared in my recommended ones and I decided to give it a try!
But this time I will go a little more focused on the story.
And I honestly feel like the story of the game is...flat?
The concept of loving yourself is interesting, of course! But I feel that the execution doesn't look so attractive and the protagonist does not empathize much with wanting to know himself or trying to see what is wrong with him.
Perhaps if you find an angle more focused on self-reflection or in which "Buddy" could be a guide so that he can broaden his horizons, they will be more than welcome and would enrich the story.
That would only be the downside! Since your writing has improved excellently with each project you release.
Ohh, thanks for the advice. While writing this, I felt like I was a bit unfocused and that really dampened the story as whole. Next chapter I'll look forward to address this more precisely! Thanks for the rating.
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Well, it appeared in my recommended ones and I decided to give it a try!
But this time I will go a little more focused on the story.
And I honestly feel like the story of the game is...flat?
The concept of loving yourself is interesting, of course! But I feel that the execution doesn't look so attractive and the protagonist does not empathize much with wanting to know himself or trying to see what is wrong with him.
Perhaps if you find an angle more focused on self-reflection or in which "Buddy" could be a guide so that he can broaden his horizons, they will be more than welcome and would enrich the story.
That would only be the downside! Since your writing has improved excellently with each project you release.
Good work, Tavios!
Ohh, thanks for the advice. While writing this, I felt like I was a bit unfocused and that really dampened the story as whole. Next chapter I'll look forward to address this more precisely! Thanks for the rating.
Always loved the concept of your reflection coming out of the mirror! I'll be interested to see how this improves with time!
Can't wait to read about this dreamcatboyfailure! 🐈
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How long is the game?
I would say roughly 1 hour and 30 minutes ? Two hours is the maximum I can think.